[nikki800]

Hi guys! I need your help. I think my essay lacks focus. The teacher said my argument is too broad. What should I do?

[jackkyy]

Try answering: what exactly do you want to prove? One strong sentence that guides the whole paper.
Did you write a clear thesis statement? That’s where everything starts.

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