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#1
"Your Pokémon successfully transformed into Beautifly Pokémon!"

Repeatability: Always
Where?: Every time you evolve a pokemon whether using an item, or by level up at [My Team].

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(1) "Your Pokémon successfully transformed into the Pokémon Beautifly!"

Basically just swapping two words around here. Not so much a grammar issue but just sentence structure, its a little... weird.

"evolved" instead of "transformed" would also be more correct to the original pokemon games.

(2) "Your Pokémon successfully evolved into the Pokémon Beautifly!"

Or just

(3) "Your Pokémon has evolved into Beautifly!"



Any of these would work fine instead, though my preference would be (3); short and simple.
#2
I like number 3
#3
Totally agree with you here — the current line feels just a bit off. "Transformed into Beautifly Pokémon" sounds more like some kind of magical girl anime moment than a standard Pokémon evolution ?

Option (3) — "Your Pokémon has evolved into Beautifly!" — is definitely the cleanest and most natural. It mirrors the style used in the mainline games, is immediately clear, and just feels right.

Option (2) works too if they want to keep it slightly more formal, but yeah, ditching "transformed" is a must. Here's hoping they patch that line — one step closer to Pokédex perfection!

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