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#31
(2015-11-28, 08:34 AM)Athalvard Wrote: Hmm . . .
I think it's need some editor  . . .

umm.. wat kind of editor ?
#32
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkk
wats the idea how can we revive arceus? the jewel of life? the life plates?
tell me tell me ^^ this is such a good story
#33
(2015-12-19, 04:37 AM)Glaceon Wrote: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkk
wats the idea how can we revive arceus? the jewel of life? the life plates?
tell me tell me ^^ this is such a good story

u will know it in next year Big Grin
#34
(2015-12-19, 04:39 AM)servine Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:37 AM)Glaceon Wrote: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkk
wats the idea how can we revive arceus? the jewel of life? the life plates?
tell me tell me ^^ this is such a good story

u will know it in next year Big Grin

next year !!!!!!!!!!
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
#35
(2015-12-19, 04:46 AM)Glaceon Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:39 AM)servine Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:37 AM)Glaceon Wrote: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkk
wats the idea how can we revive arceus? the jewel of life? the life plates?
tell me tell me ^^ this is such a good story

u will know it in next year Big Grin

next year !!!!!!!!!!
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

ok not next year
maybe in 2017?
#36
(2015-12-19, 04:48 AM)servine Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:46 AM)Glaceon Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:39 AM)servine Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:37 AM)Glaceon Wrote: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkk
wats the idea how can we revive arceus? the jewel of life? the life plates?
tell me tell me ^^ this is such a good story

u will know it in next year Big Grin

next year !!!!!!!!!!
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

ok not next year
maybe in 2017?

watttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!
#37
(2015-12-19, 04:59 AM)Glaceon Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:48 AM)servine Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:46 AM)Glaceon Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:39 AM)servine Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:37 AM)Glaceon Wrote: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkk
wats the idea how can we revive arceus? the jewel of life? the life plates?
tell me tell me ^^ this is such a good story

u will know it in next year Big Grin

next year !!!!!!!!!!
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

ok not next year
maybe in 2017?

watttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay 2019
#38
(2015-12-19, 05:02 AM)servine Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:59 AM)Glaceon Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:48 AM)servine Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:46 AM)Glaceon Wrote:
(2015-12-19, 04:39 AM)servine Wrote: u will know it in next year Big Grin

next year !!!!!!!!!!
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

ok not next year
maybe in 2017?

watttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay 2019

 your kidding me right? right!
#39
(2015-10-22, 07:50 PM)umarwaseem439 Wrote: Their English was quite bad =.=

lol
#40
(2016-07-06, 08:37 PM)kane001 Wrote:
(2015-10-22, 07:50 PM)umarwaseem439 Wrote: Their English was quite bad =.=

lol

waht's funny DodgyDodgy
i always belive in me. and i will always belive in u if u don't break my trust
#41
(2016-07-06, 08:44 PM)servine Wrote:
(2016-07-06, 08:37 PM)kane001 Wrote:
(2015-10-22, 07:50 PM)umarwaseem439 Wrote: Their English was quite bad =.=

lol

waht's funny DodgyDodgy

english is quite bad Tongue i personally think "lol" is best option to speak in this situation Big Grin
#42
(2016-07-16, 05:57 PM)kane001 Wrote:
(2016-07-06, 08:44 PM)servine Wrote:
(2016-07-06, 08:37 PM)kane001 Wrote:
(2015-10-22, 07:50 PM)umarwaseem439 Wrote: Their English was quite bad =.=

lol

waht's funny DodgyDodgy

english is quite bad Tongue i personally think "lol" is best option to speak in this situation Big Grin

yeah lol SleepySleepy
i always belive in me. and i will always belive in u if u don't break my trust
#43
i love it
#44
Blush Blush Heart Heart nice
#45
You gave it a go lol so not gonna complain, tho how about checking your grammar every now and again? Using spell check, grammar log etc It wouldn't hurt or take long but it'll make your story much better.


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#46
(2015-11-28, 08:34 AM)Athalvard Wrote: Hmm . . .
I think it's need some editor  . . .

nice story
#47
(2018-05-14, 03:22 PM)zap10 Wrote: You gave it a go lol so not gonna complain, tho how about checking your grammar every now and again? Using spell check, grammar log etc It wouldn't hurt or take long but it'll make your story much better.

Check it now
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